IOC Practice #2
Handmaid's Tale
Criterion A: Knowledge and Understanding of the text or extract
I think I would have received a 3 for this section of the rubric. While, I did not go very into depth about the context of the extract I did relate my comments to the extract most of the time.
Criterion B:Understanding of the use and effects of literary features
I think I would have gotten a 4 on this section because while I did talk about the use of the literary features, diction, flash backs and figurative language, I failed to adequately explain how they effected the reader.
Criterion C: Organization
For this section I would have given myself a 3. The presentation was organized in a way that made sense, but at some points I would go back to what I had said previously and should have incorporated that earlier.
Criterion D: Language
For this criteria I would give myself a 2. This was probably the weakest part of the commentary because my words would become jumbled and I would have to start over. Also, the language was rather repetitive.
Great blog post Carrie! You were very critical of yourself, but I think that is wise of you so that you know exactly how to improve. It is very important to relate your comments to the text more frequently, as you mentioned. It is okay to correct yourself when you make mistakes, but it is important to stay calm and collected. You'll do great Car!
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